My Speach Pls read it.
Cars Cars Cars which is better
Are electric cars better than gas-powered cars? Yes or no ?(YES) why
1. I think that people should use electric cars more than gas-powered cars because it will protect the environment,Gas-powered cars pollute our Earth in many ways.
2.Gas cars pollute the air by pushing out smoke from the engine. The oir that gas cars use is stored in large containers that can leak and harm the oceans that's why gas cars should STOP.
3. People can save around $5,000--$7,000 JUST By using electric not GAS-POWERED cars. Because in Gas-Powered cars they need petrol to run and it cost around 2.00 per liter
For this reason we should use ELECTRIC cars more than GAS-POWERED cars.
THANKYOU
Thankyou For reading my speach
To: shivran
ReplyDeleteI liked it how you used your speech writing as your blog and shared what you are doing.
Why did you choose cars as your speech writing?
I hope your speech is 3 minutes long.
From Nisita
To: shivran
ReplyDeleteI liked it how you used your speech writing as your blog and shared what you are doing.
Why did you choose cars as your speech writing?
I hope your speech is 3 minutes long.
From Nisita
Clever boy!
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you shared your speech here and Nisita is right- I hope your speech is 3 minutes long. I can tell right now that it isn't. You have a good structure for your speech BUT you need a lot more detail in the 3 middle paragraphs- convince us to think like you do. Use emotive and descriptive language- and use the persuasive writing sheet (the yellow one in the Writing modelling book on the website) to help start your sentences. You have a lot of work to do before this is 3 minutes long Shivran. Excellent concluding statement (these reasons). The other sentences together make your introduction- so you have 3 paragraphs to write- get cracking.
Ms W