Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Poem

Our school
Responsibility
Mind or bussines
Indepented
Share
Turn on
On your brain
Noungth kids are bad

Peausaurverease
Read
Idea
Mangerge
At school be good
Respect
Young people need help

Ormiston Primary



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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 19, 2015 at 10:15 PM

    Hi Shivran,
    Some great words to describe OrmPS, well done! "Perseverence" is an excellent quality to have, so keep working hard.
    Mrs Hooker

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  2. AnonymousAugust 27, 2015 at 3:03 PM

    To:Shivran
    It is good to see that you did a Acrostic poem about Ormiston primary.
    It would be great if you would have added school to your poem.
    I also liked it how you added lots of detail to your poem.
    From:Nisita

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